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    2. 知识经验角度
    (1) Little by little, our knowledge will be well enriched, and our horizons will be greatly broadened。
    逐渐的,我们的知识会得到增加,我们的视野将会大大的拓宽。
    (2) For people who want to adopt a healthy and meaningful life style, it is important to find time to learn certain new knowledge. Just as an old saying goes: it is never too late to learn。
    对于那些想过上健康而有意义的生活的人们来说,找时间学习一些新知识是很重要的,正如那句老话:活到老,学到老
    (3) The majority of students believe that part-time job will provide them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets。
    大部分学生相信业余工作会使他们有更多机会发展人际交往能力,而这对他们未来找工作是非常有好处的。
    (4) Many parents believe that additional educational activities enjoy obvious advantage. By extra studies, they maintain, their children are able to obtain many kinds of practical skills and useful knowledge, which will put them in a beneficial position in the future job markets when they grow up。
    许多家长(微博)相信额外的教育活动有许多优点,通过学习,他们的孩子可以获得很多实践技能和有用的知识,当他们长大后,这些对他们就业是大有好处的。

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    首段:现象(该警句所对应现象)+评论
    A host of people find it beneficial and rewarding totake part in various activities of love.Meanwhile, there is a metaphor/saying describing the significance oflove:Love is light, being brighter in darker places.From my point of view,people in darker places need more love and even a little help can give them hope.
    很多人发现参加爱心活动颇为有益。而且,有一句比喻/话可以描述爱心的重要性:爱心就是一盏灯,越是黑暗的地方越明亮。在我看来,身处黑暗中的人需要更多爱心,即便是一点帮助也能给他们带来光明。
    二段:意义阐述:阐述爱心的重要意义。
    (意义主题句)Love is the key tobuilding a harmonious society, and it can be likened tolight in dark places.(具体意义1:词汇排比)To begin with, as a vital quality, it bring people power, arouses their enthusiasm forlife, and helps them tocreate a promising future.(具体意义2:强调句式)In addition, it is love or others’ help that enablespeople in difficulties to build upconfidence, courage and hope.(万能表达:)As a matter of fact, individuals in mounting numbers have come to realize the significance of love: love from friends, classmates and family.
    爱心是建设和谐社会的关键,而且爱心可以被必做黑暗中的一盏灯。首先,作为一种重要素质,爱心带给人们力量,唤醒人们的生活热情,帮助人们创造光明的未来。此外,也正是爱心是的人们积累起信心,勇气和希望。事实上,越来越多的人们已经意识到爱的重要性:朋友之爱、同学之爱、家人之爱。
    尾段:举例说明爱心(即现象)+建议
    (举例)A case in point is Hope Project.(调查法描述)According to a survey, a majority of people in China admit thatthey are willing to help those children, who can not afford tuition.(建议)Thus, we should educate, advocate and encouragemore people tobe involved in activities of love.(展望未来)If we try our utmost to do so, the future ofour nation will be promising and rosy.爱心的典型例子就是希望工程。根据一项调查,绝大部分中国人都认可帮助那些交不起学费的童鞋完成学业。因此,我们应教育、倡导和鼓励更多人参加爱心活动。假如我们进全力这么做,我们国家未来将更美好和光明。

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    on one’s own account 1) 为了某人的缘故,  为了某人自己的利益 2) (=at one’s own risk) 自行 负责 3) (=by oneself)依靠自己 on account  赊账; on account of  因为; on no account 不论什么原因 也不;of …account 有…..重要性.
    on account of (=because of) 由于,因为.来源:
    be accustomed to (=be in the habit of, be used to)习惯于.
    be acquainted with(=to have knowledge of)  了解; (=to have met socially )  熟悉
    act on  奉行,按照…行动; act as 扮演; act for  代理
    adapt oneself to(=adjust oneself to)  使自己适应于
    adapt…(for) (=make sth. Suitable for a new need) 改编,  改写(以适应新的需要)
    in addition (=besides) 此外,  又,  加之
    in addition to(=as well as, besides, other than)除…外
    adhere to (=abide by, conform to, comply with, cling to, insist on, pe rsist in, observe, opinion, belief )粘附; 坚持,遵循
    adjacent(=next to, close to)  毗邻的, 临近的
    adjust..(to) (=change slightly)调节; 适应;
    have an advantage over 胜过. have the advantage of  由于…处于有利条件
    have the advantage of sb.知道某人所不知道的事

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